Alright.
Interesting use of LFO, your composition of notes seems is more or less standard... thats not inherently bad of course. Its alright, nothing special and of course i dont mean to offend you. What I do like is how the main synth pans and how you used the envelope over it. I do think more work could have been put into of course.
It is quite miscellaneous, seems like you were experimenting if anything.
Ah well, I'm sure you'll improve, you seem to know what you're doing.
Perhaps I'm just not feeling this track as much as others might? Good luck with whatever you decide to do.